If I may...I'd suggest the dungeon map be in black and white. I'll assume you used Dungeon Crafter. Do you have the old-school tiles for it?
Though I've never figured out how in the heck to do all the boxes and whatnot for a character sheet, I have to say, surely there's a more flavorful font to use on the sheet? Herkules? Titania? Unicorn? Augusta? S. John Ross's Cup & Talon? Fantasie Artistique? Primitive? Korigan? Winterland? Something from the Rush Fonts collection? ;D
"Hold off thy hands, or by Heaven I'll make a ghost of him that lets me!" - Hamlet
Okay, I've given the character sheet font a little more of a fantasy feel and included the spanish translation of the rules as created by Gabriel. For the English version, use the link above, for the Spanish version please use this link.
If you speak Spanish and you'd like to pass on some feedback to Gabriel, he would love to hear from you.